In his poem, Kim Sanghoon wanted to enlighten readers on recovery of people's miserable lives. He used a stereotyped proletarian as a narrator. However he exposed the narrator's emotions too much. Also, he failed to arrange the episodes. They wereextremly simple. He just used his poem as a fool of the ideology of proletalism. The narrator often interrupted the plot like God alrighty even though he was hot involved. Because his political altitude was prevenient, the poem lost its balance and objectivity. At that time, most of proletarian artists affatched importance to sending their message to their readers. They took the direct way instead of the artstic one much like a public speech. To enlighten people, proletarian artists took narratives into their poems. They believed if their poems were narratives, they world be successful in sending their message to the people 'We are one ! We are brothers and sisters ! We are family !' However they just concentrated on the political message not the artistic one. So, they failed to reach the goal, making a poem itself.